Thursday, August 12, 2010

the mystrery of suzi lu by alex and bailey

a crash, a scream and a gunshot.aaaaaaaaa. suzi woke up in fear. uh, it was only a dream, sighed suzi in relief. it was twelve oclock midnight. oh no, screamed suzi when she noticed that her husband and child were knowhere to be seen in the room. so she put on her gown and began to search the whole house, but in vein. she ran to the phone however the wire had been cut. then she ran to the door trying to look outside, she opened the door but even strangly enough the car was broken and covered in black, silky blood. she saw blood printed hand marks like someone was trying to get out of the car. she ran inside and went for her husbands shotgun. she grabbed her husbands shotgun when she heard the sound of flesh being ripped. she looked to the window and there she saw the twisted and ripped body of her daughter stuck to the window with a knife through her heart. in fright her daghters body started to shatle and scream. someone was coming up the stairs. suzi lu charged to the stairs like a warrior in battle. and started shooting like a maniac. however to her surprise it was her husband who slowly fell down the stairs. she screamed at the top of her lung as she ran down the stairs to help her dying husband. i am so sorry she began to weep. LOOK BEHIND YOU! suzi lu's face went pale. she turned around and was about to shoot when the dark figure plunged at her. uuuuuuuhhhhhhhh, the figure began to grab her neck on its other hand it lashed at her eyes. everything went gloomy as suzi lu saw a bright light.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Bailey and Alex, you both have very vivid imaginations! Perhaps horror writing could become your forte!
    Alison.

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  2. Awesome story guys. It nearly scared me to death!

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